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She said: I think I'm falling, for this boy I know.
He's everything I want, but his emotions never show.
What can I do? I wonder if he thinks about me.
How can I be sure? I just wish I could see
just what it is he sees when he looks Into my eyes.
I wish I could tell him, when he's not around a part of me dies...

He said: I think I'm falling, for this girl I know.
She completes me, and makes me whole.
What can I do? I'm afraid of what she thinks
I'm not the greatest guy, at least I don't think.
What do I say, how can I assert
That I love her so much, it hurts...

They talk everyday, being the best of friends.
All day long, until the day itself ends.
Niether tells the other what they really think
Though neither looks away, nor hardly even blink
Their hearts scream to be with the other
Both push the owners to move further.

Can they overcome their obsticals and take hold?
Or will they stay silent and let fate unfold?
What can they say to prove to the other,
That for them, there is no other?
What will they say? What will become of the two?
What if I said this was about us, and that I love you...
©2006-2009 ~Twitchified
:icontwitchified:

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Quickly written, but the point is made.

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:iconrebel-of-spades:
I love this. Period.
^^
It's so true too...and I'm actually on the brink right now of telling someone that I know how I feel about him. Maybe this'll give me a little more courage to do it. Thanks!

--
Light up, light up
As if you had a choice.
Even if you cannot hear my voice,
I'll be right beside you dear.
:icontwitchified:
You're welcome. Actually, I'm a hypocrite...I write this to inspire people to just say it, and yet I can't bring myself to do the same. Lol. I hope you find what you need to tell him. And thank you.

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"You're pathetic. Wasn't it proof enough when (she) left your miserable ass that there wasn't room for something as moronic as love? It's a four letter word, and if you ask me it's far worse than any other 'curse' word. Love is the equivalent of fuck."
:iconrebel-of-spades:
Haha, well thanks anyway for writing it. I did get the courage to ask him, though I'm a loser and did it over e-mail...now I just have to wait and wait for a response. XD

I hope one day you'll get the courage you need to say it too.

--
Light up, light up
As if you had a choice.
Even if you cannot hear my voice,
I'll be right beside you dear.
:icondark-angel-kagura:
its beautiful. it made my heart pound rapidly.
when did you write this? is it from a personal experiance? did you have real life insperation?
is it about someone else....
anyway its great!! :clap:
:icontwitchified:
Actually, I was inspired by a certain someone. I wrote it last night. She says she likes it, but that's about all that was said. 'Course, I didn't really tell her that it was to her in particular. But, it'll turn out.

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"You're pathetic. Wasn't it proof enough when (she) left your miserable ass that there wasn't room for something as moronic as love? It's a four letter word, and if you ask me it's far worse than any other 'curse' word. Love is the equivalent of fuck."
:iconlirimakat:
Oh, he got the courage alright... :XD:


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:music:"Music is a moral law. It gives soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination, a charm to sadness, gaiety and life to everything. It is the essence of order and lends to all that is good and just and beautiful." - Plato:music:

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